Outline of Classification Essay, Pickpockets oh Pickpockets

THEME            : crime

TITLE               : Pickpockets oh Pickpockets

INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH

General statement       : The easiest crime in the world is pick-pocketing

Thesis Statement         : At this chance, I would just tell you kinds of pickpockets,

their identifications, and how to prevent them

BODY

Paragraph 1

Topic Sentence            : The first one is the loner pickpocket

Supporting ideas         : stand alone

Supporting ideas         : target, reckless people

Supporting ideas         : act in crowd

Concluding sentence   : To prevent ‘meeting’ this kind, you have to be careful

with your belongings and do not use too many ‘attractive

accessories such as jewelry, expensive watches, etc.

Paragraph 2

Topic Sentence            : After the loner pickpocket, there comes the groupie

pickpocket

Supporting ideas         : work in group

Supporting ideas         : target, kind-hearted and/or confused and lost people

Supporting ideas         : act mostly in crowd

Concluding sentence   : Use your intuition and always watch your belongings, I

suggest.

CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH

Topic statement           : The loner pickpockets or the groupie pickpockets, though

Do not risk your lives, they are still stated as a crime.

Summary (phrase)       : steal your belongings – the precious one

                                    - To prevent: - be careful

                                    - do not look confused or lost – even when you are

                                    - do not talk to strangers, but do not be so paranoid either

Pickpockets, oh Pickpockets, Classification Essay

Pickpockets, oh Pickpockets

Who says crime is hard? They are very easy, especially Pick-pocketing. Even the easiest crime is pick-pocketing. You would just pick something valuable from other people’s pockets, and BAM! You have it all. Does not mean to teach you to pick-pocketing, of course. It is a bad thing to do, a crime, and the risk is grounded in jail. At this chance, I would just tell you kinds of pickpockets, their identifications, and how to prevent them.

There are two major kinds of pickpockets. The first one is the loner pickpocket (LP). LPs are either experienced and/or by perforce. The experienced ones are kleptomaniacs which means that they do it as a habit. And the ‘by perforce’ ones do it because some personal urgent business. They work alone on the spot, but usually there are links that connect one LP to other. They after people who seem reckless with their belongings so when they took their things, these people will hardly realize. These people are found in crowd, that is why the LPs are also mostly found in crowd. To prevent ‘meeting’ this kind, you have to be careful with your belongings and do not use too many ‘attractive’ accessories such as jewelry, expensive watches, etc.

After the loner pickpocket, there comes the groupie pickpocket. Like the nickname, this ones work as a group to pickpocket. They used to be the LPs and they decided to work together as one and share the ‘results’. They after the people who seem confused and lost, and sometimes kind-hearted. Some people will try to distract the victim’s attention, and some try to pick the belongings. They sometimes play a drama when one is pretending to lose consciousness so the one who helps will be pickpocket-ed. This will attract many attention if they do it in crowd, so the victim and people surround him will not realize that it is a trick. It is pretty hard to prevent these groupie pickpocket, because how can we differ which one really needs our help and which one is the drama from these groups? Use your intuition and always watch your belongings, I suggest.

The loner pickpockets or the groupie pickpockets, though do not risk your lives, they are still stated as a crime. They both steal your belongings, even the precious ones. Do not underestimate their skill, they are very skilled in distinguishing the real-expensive watches and the fake ones. How to avoid being ‘handy’ with them? The most important is, be careful; always watch your belongings. Next, do not seem confused or lost – although when you are. Find some safe place or information center to help you. Last but not least, as our parents advised us when we were children; do not talk to strangers. However, you do not have to close your mouth to everyone either. I suggest be natural is the best way.

Outline of Comparison-Contrast Essay Say,'Cheers!'

OUTLINE

THEME: taking pictures

TITLE: Say, ‘Cheers!’

INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH

General statement       : People take pictures to safe moments the have and to

                                    remind the  memories

Thesis statement          : Photobox and photo studio are some ways to take pictures

                                    which have similarities and differences

BODY

Comparison Paragraph

Topic sentence            :  Photobox and photo studio are similar in some aspects

Supporting idea           : function : take pictures to create moment

Supporting idea           : enjoyable

Supporting idea           : get the instant result (not with film rolls anymore)

Concluding sentence   : Because of the reasons above, people love to use

                                    photobox and photo studio

Transition Paragraph

            Though having many similarities, photobox and photo studio also have some differnces. they are not the same based on their size of place, their price, and their results.

Contrast Parapgraph: Photobox

Topic Sentence            : Photobox, photo in the box, is way different from photo

                                    studio

Supporting idea           : size, smaller because it is in a box

Supporting idea           : price, cheaper. the cheapest photobox is only IDR

                                    10,000

Supporting idea           : result, depends on our shots

Concluding sentence   : For instance, photobox is for fun and for informal use.

Contrast Parapgraph: Photo studio

Topic sentence            : While photobox seems to take all the advantages, photo

                                    studio secretly hide their powerful reasons

Supporting idea           : size, wider and sometimes outdoor

Supporting idea           : price, more expensive but reasonable

Supporting idea           : result, artistic because taken by experienced

                                    photographers

Concluding sentence   : With those costumes, experienced photographers, and not-

                                    so-cheap price, we can conclude that Photo studio is for

                                    formal use such as; pre-wedding, family picture, etc

CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH

Topic statement           : Above all, photobox and photo studio are similar but not

                                    the same.

Summary                     - similar because both are enjoyable, instant, and to snap

                                    moments

                                    - Different because photobox is informal, photo studio

                                    is formal

Concluding sentence   : Nevertheless, either using photobox or photo studio,

                                    people always love taking pictures

Say, 'Cheers!', Comparisons-Contrast Essay

Say, ‘Cheers!’

How do you take pictures? Is it by yourselves, or you ask someone for assistance? People love taking pictures. they take them to save moments the have and to remind the memories, and they do it not only by themselves or by someone’s help.  Nowadays, there are so many ways to take pictures. Photobox or Photo studio, for example. Photobox and photo studio are some ways to take pictures that have similarities and differences.

They are similar in some aspects. First one is the function. they are made to create moments that will last long, with people who are close to our lives such as mates, colleagues, family, lovers, bestfriends, etc. Another, they both are enjoyable. We can take pictures which is sweet, gothic, standard, or even crazy. They are also now can be produced instantly. They no longer need foll films, and the space between taking pictures and getting the final result is only ten to twenty minutes! You will need more than that if you still use rolls. That’s why people love using both photobox and photo studio.

   Though having many similarities, photobox and photo studio also have some differences. they are not the same based on their size of place, their price, and their results.

Photobox, photo in the box, is way different from photo studio. First, it is smaller in size. We have to take a picture in a provided and well-prepared box. Very simple. It is also very cheap. The cheapest one only costs IDR 10,000. Next, its result depends on our shots, making us to be free to express ourselves. For instance, photobox is for fun and for informal use.

 While photobox seems to take all the advantages, photo studio secretly hide their powerful reasons. It is wider, and sometimes outdoor. It needs a wider place, because there are more instruments and furniture that support the photograph. It is more expensive, however in reasonable price. Why reasonable? because we will (sometimes) need costumes. Moreover, the greater the photographers, the more expensive you will cost. The result is also artistic, because as stated before, it is taken by the photographers – the experienced ones. With those costumes, experienced photographers, and not-so-cheap price, we can conclude that Photo studio is for formal use such as; pre-wedding, family picture, etc.

Above all, photobox and photo studio are similar but not the same. they are similar because they both are enjoyable and instant. Different, because based on their size, price, and results, photobox is for informal use while photo studio is for formal use. Nevertheless, either using photobox or photo studio, people always love taking pictures. Say, ‘Cheers!’