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Senin, 10 Januari 2011

Outline of Classification Essay, Pickpockets oh Pickpockets


THEME            : crime
TITLE               : Pickpockets oh Pickpockets

INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH
General statement       : The easiest crime in the world is pick-pocketing
Thesis Statement         : At this chance, I would just tell you kinds of pickpockets,
their identifications, and how to prevent them
BODY
Paragraph 1
Topic Sentence            : The first one is the loner pickpocket
Supporting ideas         : stand alone
Supporting ideas         : target, reckless people
Supporting ideas         : act in crowd
Concluding sentence   : To prevent ‘meeting’ this kind, you have to be careful
with your belongings and do not use too many ‘attractive
accessories such as jewelry, expensive watches, etc.

Paragraph 2
Topic Sentence            : After the loner pickpocket, there comes the groupie
pickpocket
Supporting ideas         : work in group
Supporting ideas         : target, kind-hearted and/or confused and lost people
Supporting ideas         : act mostly in crowd
Concluding sentence   : Use your intuition and always watch your belongings, I
suggest.


CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH
Topic statement           : The loner pickpockets or the groupie pickpockets, though
Do not risk your lives, they are still stated as a crime.
Summary (phrase)       : steal your belongings – the precious one
                                    - To prevent: - be careful
                                    - do not look confused or lost – even when you are
                                    - do not talk to strangers, but do not be so paranoid either

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