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Senin, 10 Januari 2011

Outline of Comparison-Contrast Essay Say,'Cheers!'


OUTLINE
THEME: taking pictures
TITLE: Say, ‘Cheers!’

INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH
General statement       : People take pictures to safe moments the have and to
                                    remind the  memories
Thesis statement          : Photobox and photo studio are some ways to take pictures
                                    which have similarities and differences

BODY
Comparison Paragraph
Topic sentence            :  Photobox and photo studio are similar in some aspects
Supporting idea           : function : take pictures to create moment
Supporting idea           : enjoyable
Supporting idea           : get the instant result (not with film rolls anymore)
Concluding sentence   : Because of the reasons above, people love to use
                                    photobox and photo studio

Transition Paragraph
            Though having many similarities, photobox and photo studio also have some differnces. they are not the same based on their size of place, their price, and their results.

Contrast Parapgraph: Photobox
Topic Sentence            : Photobox, photo in the box, is way different from photo
                                    studio
Supporting idea           : size, smaller because it is in a box
Supporting idea           : price, cheaper. the cheapest photobox is only IDR
                                    10,000
Supporting idea           : result, depends on our shots
Concluding sentence   : For instance, photobox is for fun and for informal use.

Contrast Parapgraph: Photo studio
Topic sentence            : While photobox seems to take all the advantages, photo
                                    studio secretly hide their powerful reasons
Supporting idea           : size, wider and sometimes outdoor
Supporting idea           : price, more expensive but reasonable
Supporting idea           : result, artistic because taken by experienced
                                    photographers
Concluding sentence   : With those costumes, experienced photographers, and not-
                                    so-cheap price, we can conclude that Photo studio is for
                                    formal use such as; pre-wedding, family picture, etc

CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH
Topic statement           : Above all, photobox and photo studio are similar but not
                                    the same.
Summary                     - similar because both are enjoyable, instant, and to snap
                                    moments
                                    - Different because photobox is informal, photo studio
                                    is formal
Concluding sentence   : Nevertheless, either using photobox or photo studio,
                                    people always love taking pictures

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